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Mangakiss Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2015  New Deviant
  Blowkiss valentine fella (Love) 
sweet story
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rembulanemas Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2014
damn, every poem is a gem. Do you have any tips for a newb? :/
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spoems Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2014   Writer
I appreciate that.

My tip for newbs is write what you feel is good poetry. What do I think good poetry is?  In general, I think the best poetry is the kind that is relatable without being too familiar, uses fresh language without being too obscure, is honest and personal without appearing maudlin or melodramatic, is imaginative without being overly absurd, and most importantly, says something about life, the universe and/or everything that bears repeating.  Easy, right? ;)

If you want a critique or specific feedback, let me know.
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rembulanemas Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014
Well.. that's easier said than done I suppose :D
What is the kind that is relatable without being too familiar? 
I can relate to all your advice, though. I have been thinking to read 
some old poetry, too. Such as Poe's captured my attention. They are dark,
elegant, and sort of melodramatic in some ways, but not exploiting too much.
Any suggestion for good reading? that would help me very much :)
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spoems Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014   Writer
My favorite poets are Plath, Kerouac, ane Ginsburg. Gary Snyder is a good read, too. Lots of others are noteworthy, as well. But maybe that's a good start?
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rembulanemas Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014
Alright then, gotta work hard :)
Thanks for the great advice!
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foureyes Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2013
Words of wisdom,..........'Positive' is my fav :clap:
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spoems Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2013   Writer
I appreciate the visit. Thanks.
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eqlrytes Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2011
Hi, Shane! It's just lil ole me. :D
Came across another small stumbling block in my poetry writing. Short story. Seems dA has a dark side , along with the good side. :nod:
Always a pleasure to open up my Notes and find links to naked men . Hm. What is this world coming to? *sigh*
Oh well, it wont be putting a damper on my chosen themes. But, I am taking a short breather for an hour or so. Calm my head.
So I decided to shoot over to your lovely Gallery and start opening up some of your treasures. :)
I probably won't have time to root around through everything, but I have a full cup of fresh coffee..and I'm going to peruse till my dinner is ready.
:heart:
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spoems Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2011   Writer
naked men in the Notes, huh? not good at all (unless they were invited, of course.) :) thanks so much for stopping by. i hope you find something worth your while :heart:
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